A Very Pyoko Adventure

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Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	Aug 31, 2011	Some parts I found hilarious, but I prefer realism in my stories, Grues are impervious to dangerous items - like for example Chuck Norris. Though they have a tendency to be afraid of the light, since they're that difficult to damage, fire should be no problem for them to endure. There are only a few ways of actually killing a Grue - unless by 'Grue' you meant Domo-Kun. As said before, Grues are unsuitable for a story, unless you know how to kill one, and know what way to introduce the weaponrry to your story in a way that doesn't make the story too random, which will be complicated This was hardly a story, yet had me grinning through a couple - or more pages, the rest of it wasn't suitable to a story site. You need more of a description, and further details, so I'll have to give this a five, as it is unfinished, and slightly too unrealistic. I'm talking about the way you produce the Grue here. by TheCandyMan on Aug 31, 2011
writer22	Oct 30, 2006	This is the stupidest story ever!!!!! by writer22 on Oct 30, 2006
donteatpoop	Jun 17, 2005	People seriously gave this thing 10's?!! A feel I'm being generous with this three. by donteatpoop on Jun 17, 2005
jeffisthebest	Nov 13, 2004	uh, okay. Actually, its bad but i gave it a six because of the totally hilarious wall part. by jeffisthebest on Nov 13, 2004
YazZMaN	Nov 4, 2004	Good story. If only it didn't have any loose ends I would give it a 10. by YazZMaN on Nov 4, 2004
Esper	Sep 24, 2004	by Esper on Sep 24, 2004
Backslider	Jul 20, 2004	by Backslider on Jul 20, 2004
Detonator	Jul 16, 2004	by Detonator on Jul 16, 2004
Zaratustra	Jul 16, 2004	This story is the bestest story ever made. by Zaratustra on Jul 16, 2004

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