"Swift, Silent, & Deadly"

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
jumperbumper	Apr 5, 2021	not bad lol by jumperbumper on Apr 5, 2021
DanielHS11	Oct 11, 2019	Great! by DanielHS11 on Oct 11, 2019
readernumber1	Sep 24, 2019	the story is great well combined and draws me in its like impart of it. by readernumber1 on Sep 24, 2019
Corgi289	Aug 31, 2019	Too many spelling and grammatical errors. Only skimmed a couple pages but the errors are very easy to see if you would comb through the story for a little bit. by Corgi289 on Aug 31, 2019
PotatoCaptain	Jul 25, 2019	Really good story, I really enjoyed reading it! by PotatoCaptain on Jul 25, 2019
Dabmonstermaster567	Jul 20, 2019	I was not even born in 2004... but still great story by Dabmonstermaster567 on Jul 20, 2019
PickleKing	May 17, 2019	Great story! by PickleKing on May 17, 2019
DanielHS11	Apr 20, 2019	Good. But I found some loose ends. by DanielHS11 on Apr 20, 2019
FictionLV	Oct 27, 2018	The rating system confused me and I gave it the wrong score >.< by FictionLV on Oct 27, 2018
FictionLV	Oct 27, 2018	by FictionLV on Oct 27, 2018
Darkdeath	Jul 7, 2018	Good by Darkdeath on Jul 7, 2018
SammieEM	Feb 6, 2018	Good story, made me feel as if I was the soldier... by SammieEM on Feb 6, 2018
MouthWorm	Jan 24, 2018	Pretty good. I like the fact that it’s about military. by MouthWorm on Jan 24, 2018
dungeondelver	Nov 18, 2017	Pretty good, generally fun to play through. Needs to fix many spelling mistakes, but overall a great story. by dungeondelver on Nov 18, 2017
NinjaAssassin7685	Oct 21, 2017	Really well written beside some mistakes, very interesting, and overall an excellent story. by NinjaAssassin7685 on Oct 21, 2017
Phoenix4747	Feb 20, 2010	awesome story please keep me informed of any updates by Phoenix4747 on Feb 20, 2010
shiningstar2009	May 10, 2009	relly good storie butit seems tojust go round and round in circles after a serten point by shiningstar2009 on May 10, 2009
apotheosis	Jun 16, 2007	This story has some nice action, and I like your use of images but the grammar and writing structure could use some work. Overall it is a fairly decent story but it it could definitely use some editing. by apotheosis on Jun 16, 2007
drakes3	Jun 6, 2007	ace by drakes3 on Jun 6, 2007
SeanDillonZ	Oct 11, 2006	by SeanDillonZ on Oct 11, 2006
noots	Sep 6, 2006	by noots on Sep 6, 2006
Chickenman	Aug 30, 2006	by Chickenman on Aug 30, 2006
shagggy	May 3, 2006	by shagggy on May 3, 2006
messa	Oct 17, 2005	by messa on Oct 17, 2005
donteatpoop	Jul 2, 2005	Great story, as usual. But the title bothers me. It makes me think of a bean burrito that got to you faster than you expected it to. by donteatpoop on Jul 2, 2005
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 19, 2005	I bow to this. Not only do your write good room descs. but you use a vast array pictures as well. I tried using pictures alot but it didn't go too well. I also like this as it's an army story and the best one iv'e found on here. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
Karold	Nov 4, 2004	The story was good, the Mortal Kombat music made it better. Will you tell me how you added it? (Also don't send the stories, I already have them) by Karold on Nov 4, 2004
packratt5454	Sep 30, 2004	This story is really fun...And well written...But I can't believe you don't have "review rooms" on...Some people could put stupid crap on there. by packratt5454 on Sep 30, 2004
SimonF12003	Sep 9, 2004	by SimonF12003 on Sep 9, 2004

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