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Knock At The Door

Written by TheKoolAidGuy / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan		May 29, 2011	Just simply not enjoyable. Some parts have terrible spelling or grammar, there's a lack of effort on the choices, and they're just too random. I hate the way some people think that this kind of randomness is funny. I'm giving you a 2 because you managed to write more than 3 rooms, and fortuantely you didn't have the worst put in effort. by TheCandyMan on May 29, 2011
KingMalice		May 9, 2010	I like that this story has no sustenance, it's fun for when I have writers block by KingMalice on May 9, 2010
ychiang		Sep 27, 2007	Extremely funny. by ychiang on Sep 27, 2007
Leblanc4prez		Aug 24, 2006	Were just chiels that winna ding! And canna be disputed! (Scotish language alert!) by Leblanc4prez on Aug 24, 2006
michaelrayholt		Aug 22, 2006	I didn't think it would be possible for something to be very much WORSE than "Another Monday Morning". I was wrong. by michaelrayholt on Aug 22, 2006
apotheosis		Aug 13, 2006	Essentially like a crappy version of Another Monday Morning. There are a lot of choices but they lack any substance or effort. Not particularly funny or enjoyable. by apotheosis on Aug 13, 2006
Marshmello		Mar 17, 2006	by Marshmello on Mar 17, 2006
TheKoolAidGuy		Nov 10, 2005	If this wasn't one of the first stories (I actually think it was the first) to be posted on the site, it would be a 1. I think it's shit. AAaand, for the record: I have written ONE room in this story. And it wasn't even the first room. Don't even know which one it was... So don't blame me. It sucks. Yes. Get over it. by TheKoolAidGuy on Nov 10, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby		Aug 27, 2005	Do not pass Go. Do not collect $200. Do not write. Please, spare humanity of THAT. by ChubbyTeletubby on Aug 27, 2005
donteatpoop		Jun 9, 2005	A little too random. Not all that funny either. I respect that iit is a pioneering storym but I can't say that I liked it. by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2005
ZavuSilverlight		Feb 19, 2005	I like randomness. I also like J-lo giving me a blow job till I blow. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
Storm		Feb 6, 2005	YHEA oh man this one is so funny i mean nobody can think this sort of stuff up these days wow its so cool good one!!! by Storm on Feb 6, 2005
Karold		Nov 12, 2004	Man I have a strong dislike of this story because of simple effort lack. by Karold on Nov 12, 2004
pellent		Aug 25, 2004	You're dead! Give me a break! by pellent on Aug 25, 2004
SMThomas		Jul 5, 2004	by SMThomas on Jul 5, 2004
EnderWiggin		Jan 12, 2004	Another Classic CYOA online story. Not particularly good by today's story standards, but I'll give it a 7 simply because its a guilty pleasure. by EnderWiggin on Jan 12, 2004